Audience Feedback - First and Second Magazine Draft

First Advert;

Elizabeth Potts - "I think you should make your name smaller and have the album name included so people know what the album will be called. The release date needs to be smaller as well."

Nathan Green - "Maybe you could make the release date smaller."

James Arthey - "The album name should be on the magazine advert"

Jamie Cross - "Re-size the main image and add more text, try adding in the names of the songs from the album."

Second Advert;

Elizabeth Potts - "The album name could be placed above the image along with your name"

Nathan Green - "The release date should be added, possibly somewhere are the bottom but do not make it bigger than the album name."

James Arthey - "The star rating should be smaller, change it so that it is placed in the centre."